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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 30, 2013 7:18:34 GMT 1
That chapter was badass.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 30, 2013 10:56:36 GMT 1
Next chapter, robots and cyborgs.
Changed the introduction page a little.
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 1, 2013 18:09:46 GMT 1
So that was the end!
Kind of hard to comment without giving away spoilers, but Gorvus you know how much I've loved this story! Imm'a treasure it.
Next time don't make it all about me quite so much - my head is interfering with the ceiling fan after that last chapter. xD I was waiting for somebody to interrupt me and say:
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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 1, 2013 19:21:56 GMT 1
That was pretty good. Well done sir!
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 1, 2013 21:36:44 GMT 1
You guuuuuuuuys
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Feb 10, 2013 16:41:31 GMT 1
I'm a little late to the party, but I've managed to finish it recently. Have to say I've enjoy the whole thing, the robots and cyborgs part kind of makes sense with the hints and all.
And the ending is a good send off.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 10, 2013 16:45:04 GMT 1
Thanks for the read Tillian! Hope I didnt make tihngs ackward...
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Feb 10, 2013 16:46:43 GMT 1
It's not awkward, it's perfect with the ending.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 10, 2013 17:11:24 GMT 1
Thanks for the read Tillian, glad you enjoyed it. Now how bout some artwork eh? -wink, nudge nudge-
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 4, 2013 22:32:01 GMT 1
Okay guys, i'm starting a new series called " The Final Frontier: A tale of the Blue Lady."
It's basiacly the same, except it's Star Trek i;m going to poke fun off. But im gonna throw in all kinds of sf in there so there ya go.
Characters are as followed
Meironmaiden as Captain Isaac Ron Madden
The newly appointed Captain of the USS Dauntless, the msot inept ship in Starfleet. For disobeying orders on a away mission which resulted into his ship taken away from him ( and nearly his rank), Captain Madden has been given command of the worst ship in the fleet. He is a battle hardend Captain who doesnt like followjng the rules, who might be the right captain for the job.
JKlinders as Commander Linden
Commander Linden is the XO of the Dauntless and a Vulcan. Besides being made fun of because of his ears and lack of emotions, he is the only officer on the ship who tries to do his job.
Lily Ariel Black as Lt. Commander Lilian Black
Lt. Commander Black is head of security on the Dauntless, but has grown very lax due to years of nothing happening. She is wishing for something exciting to happen so she might finally see some action and follow into the footsteps of Captain Kirk. Except for the sleeping with green women, and the horrible speech impediment. Has a crush on Commander Linden.
Buch as Doctor Christian Buchalan
Doctor Buchalan is the Dauntless' acting medical officer who enjoys a nice drink from time to time...being every five minutes. After having tried to seduce the ECH ( emergency Command Hologram) and screwing around with it's programming, the sole "competent" medical officer on the ship. He is a veteran of the Dominion War along with Gorvar.
Gorvar as Chief Engineer Gorvar
A Gorn whose brilliant expertice in warp cores being the sole reason, next to his track record during the Dominion war, he is not discharged from duty. These flaws include several cases of being intoxicated on duty, throwing rocks at ensigns ( even when sober) and nearly eating the previous captain ( confusing him for a tribble).
Tillian as Counselor Aurora Tillia
The ship's Counselor from Luna. Despite not being a Vulcan, she has similar attidudes to them and is being teased as a wanna-be vulcan and woke up several times with pointy ears glued to her. Spends msot of her time doodling as a result, despite it not being logical.
Clint as Lt Commander Francis Clint
The only Starfleet officer known to man, wearing a cowboy hat and trench coat. He is a high admiral's ( possibly) deranged son and is allowed to serve on the Dauntless, both to keep the family tradition going and making sure he doesnt accidenly start a fireifght in the neutral zone.
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Post by CAPT Issac R. Madden on Apr 8, 2013 12:35:22 GMT 1
If I might make a suggestion: could the Dauntless be either a Miranda-class (a la USS Reliant) or a re-fit Constitution-class (Enterprise-A type)? It would fit in with the "worst ship in Starfleet" bit.
Also... the Dauntless has the potential to be the power in this sector, but can it match the Interceptor for speed? ;D
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 8, 2013 15:21:06 GMT 1
xD
This is already making me chuckle. I especially like that I'm drunk and sexually perverse, as in real life. Don't forget to include Lieden, Cali, Chantress, Glow, etc., etc. as weird aliens.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 8, 2013 15:47:59 GMT 1
The Dauntless is probably going to be a old Constitution class ship which saw it's hayday in the Kirk-Era and is barely afloat (?) in this one. It's not a good ship by any stretch of the imagination, but hey it has a holodeck and Dr Buchalan and Chief Gorvar got enough moonshine on it There will be some space battles dont worry, but like the original trek it will be about cool SF stuff. so lets of talking. And drinking. and treating women as obje-I mean respectable people....-cough-
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Post by Clint Johnston on Apr 8, 2013 15:54:45 GMT 1
From Ser Clint to a subject of nepotism? An outrage! Though I suppose I brought it on myself, commenting on Jurassic Park. Helloooo red shirt.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 8, 2013 16:27:59 GMT 1
Hey, i gave you loads of character development in the last one and i need my cannon fodder!
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