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Post by Cali on Jun 19, 2011 21:04:10 GMT 1
Err, have you stopped naming your chapters? =P
Anyway, read the last chapter on the second page. Really like where the story is going. Liked the interview between Jimmy Rhyder and the Illusive Man.
This post will be edited once I read the next chapter.
EDITO:
Very good chapter, Spacey, even if there wasn't much action and there was only one twist to the chapter. Liked the end of it.
Also, I felt like I was actually revisiting the citadel once more, and the music certainly helped. Nice job with that.
Eager to see what exactly this cylinder holds. I assume it's nothing beneficial to the integrity of the universe, considering the imminent reaper threat.
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 21, 2011 22:42:58 GMT 1
Why on earth has this thread got a 1000+ views? Bizzare. Anyhow, I'm here... typing away. It's 10 to 11 but I'm just gonna get typing I think.
Where the hell is my coffee?
Hmm.
Oh. How the hell is Mia going to stop that-
Oh. Never mind.
Heheheh.
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Post by Cali on Jun 21, 2011 23:27:20 GMT 1
In the meantime I suppose I should be continuing Chapter 18 of Cyan Steel. That's been in development way too long, and it's not that important of a plot development either.
Also, I'm not sure why the review thread got twice as many views as the story. Doesn't make sense. :/
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 22, 2011 22:48:04 GMT 1
There's a nasty storm in my town tonight. Ahhh!!! the joys of wales! Anyway, it's 10 to 2 in the morning here, and i'm just typing. and typing......... and typing.
Bloody hell, the thunder is loud!! scary scary scary!!!
So when in the next chapter you read the line: “I will help you. one last time... my love.”
Think of me, jumping out of my skin and shrieking on a foot stall like mum from the classic tom and jerry cartoons.
On a side note, THIS THREAD HAS JUMPED BY 200 VIEWS. WHO IS DOING THIS!? Cali!? maybe i could get blood of the magi to jump by 200 as well....
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Post by Cali on Jun 23, 2011 0:42:41 GMT 1
Hey, hey, hey! It isn't me! Must be a Google bot trick or something. I may have a lot of spare time but not nearly enough to up the view count on this.
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Post by Cali on Jun 23, 2011 7:43:28 GMT 1
Arousing further suspicion with a double post:
I imagine actors in the place of characters in the stories I read rather often. This is the cast lineup of sorts.
Rhyder - Harrison Ford Mia - Marion Cottilard (Voice) Finn - Kevin Spacey Anya - Naomie Harris Zadia - Jeanette Goldstein Hannah - Veronica Cartwright Wester - Tom Siezemore Admiral X - Judi Dench
Probably not what you were going for in the first place, but you did leave the character's appearances to the imagination.
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 23, 2011 10:37:16 GMT 1
watching Judi dench getting chopped in hald would have been interesting...
OMGWTFBBQ!!! NEW CHAPTER!!!
near the end now. about... three (ish) chapters left.
Who will survive!? WHO!?
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Post by Cali on Jun 23, 2011 19:03:25 GMT 1
Uh oh! He's still alive!
Shit just got real!
Awesome chapter as always. Wonder how long it'll be before Sovereign, Saren and his geth goons show up to trash the Citadel, and how the boys and girls in Echoes will fit into the chaos once it starts.
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 23, 2011 22:22:13 GMT 1
It's going to feel really werid finishing this story. My first ever go at creative writing. Mad.
I'm praying that Blood of the Magi will be bigger, sexier and hopefully better written.
But Rhyder and Mia and Finn and Anya.... It's a really odd feeling to know i will never write for them again. Mass effect echoes was always something of a practice run.... But....
Hmm.
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Post by Cali on Jun 23, 2011 22:42:31 GMT 1
Well there's always sequels if you miss them.
Well, unless you have it planned out where a sequel isn't possible...
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 24, 2011 20:19:27 GMT 1
"It's on fire," Kirsty muttered, awestruck at the devastation playing out in front of her. "The F***ING Presidium is on fire!!"
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Post by Cali on Jun 24, 2011 20:43:41 GMT 1
Called it.
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 24, 2011 23:48:28 GMT 1
Next chapter is up on fanfic.net. better, musical version will be posted tomorrow.
one more chapter to go. oh me, oh my.
(maybe two if you include.... well. That's just something to look forward to.)
EDIT: UP and running. Timesplitters future perfect is Rhyder's theme, ive decided. Portal 2 Four part plan is pretty much Wester's theme.
(Ironically, he does have a four part plan)
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Post by Cali on Jun 25, 2011 19:54:27 GMT 1
Another good chapter. Excellent choice of music once again.
Sorta sad this is nearing its end, but hey, all good things must conclude.
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Post by Spaced20 on Jun 26, 2011 12:07:47 GMT 1
Ive decided to do a little epilogue, just to wrap up everything from the story. As far as reaching the end goes.... oh, its mad. Year of my life in 100000 words. Lol.
It has been a learning curve, hell those first 6 or 7 chapters were awful. But I think I'm proud of it. Overall.
Now let me get this chapter done, and its onto greener pastures.
Fereldan and 1940s London.
Not in the same story.
Although, there's an idea.......
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