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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 3, 2013 7:42:13 GMT 1
The more the merrier, I say! But write as you feel, man. Write the best story in your eyes. And if that means giving me more lines than Clint and making me the hero and having me fight him at the end, then so be it.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 3, 2013 10:32:45 GMT 1
Seven is a good number, so i'll do just that. As long we dont have 13 dwarves.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 3, 2013 15:02:25 GMT 1
And if that means giving me more lines than Clint and making me the hero and having me fight him at the end, then so be it. Subtle... Too bad you'll lose. We'll give you a great funeral though. Tillian may even blink and wonder where you went.
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 3, 2013 17:38:40 GMT 1
You're a feisty little one! But I probably would lose. xD
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 3, 2013 17:45:37 GMT 1
Buch vs Clint endgame? Done, how do you feel if it;s on a Aztec Temple?
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 3, 2013 17:50:25 GMT 1
I'm hesitant to dictate the story to you, but that sounds interesting. I wonder if Clint is eviil or I am foolish, though!
As for Aztec temples, I was born to fight Clint on an Aztec temple.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 3, 2013 17:53:25 GMT 1
There you go, Climax sorted. I will let you both ponder who the bad guy is....
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 3, 2013 20:37:49 GMT 1
Latest episode is really special, really good. I like the way you go around the characters and the tone gets more and more relaxed. The fun of the caricatures aside, that was a really nice piece of adventure fiction. Loved all the ominous foreshadowing too!
Some of the characters (Gorvar and Lily for example) seem very deep and nuanced. And I absolutey love Tillian in this one. That bit really does capture the real one's personality I think. hat felt a lot like a conversation I would have with her while she painted.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 3, 2013 22:55:57 GMT 1
Hmm... Why Aztec? You got something against Mayans?
Doesn't have to end in death, FYI. I might only paralyze Buch.
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Post by jklinders on Jan 3, 2013 22:58:33 GMT 1
Mayans got enough press this year. Let's let another central/South American native culture get some press for once.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 3, 2013 23:00:57 GMT 1
Well the Aztecs totally outdid them on human sacrifice, so I suppose they can get some glory.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 3, 2013 23:45:37 GMT 1
Wow, I even made Linders change his avatar....
I;m glad you gus seem to like this so much. I always wanted to do a D and D game, but i never got to due to transport/not knwoing anyone/lack of communication. So this little thing here im writing was a Campaign I had in mind. I always wrote a lot of superhero team fanfics where I focused on characters like I did here. Thats why I love Fellowship stories and Super hero Teams, there are laods of characters to follow and you see them all grow and interact with each other.
Seriously guys, im so glad you like this thing. It's one of my hobbies. Also I like to pay Iron back for what he did to me...and make Tillian ackward haha.
if you got suggestions or questions or verbal insults, lemme know!
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Post by jklinders on Jan 4, 2013 0:10:28 GMT 1
I dabbled a bit as a DM myself when I was younger. I sucked at it though.
I haven't had a group to do Pen and paper roleplay in years. Really the story is quite good. I really want to see where this goes.
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Post by Lily Ariel Linders on Jan 4, 2013 0:24:56 GMT 1
I really do love this story, Gorvar - it's one of the most enjoyable reads I've read online in a while... please keep it going!
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 4, 2013 21:14:04 GMT 1
A few language errors in this one. The Crewman warns the Captain in french, when you've established the goblin captain at least as Scottish. There are some odd notes in there "Mere few inches." I'm interested to see who the Rat is a reflection of.
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