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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Dec 2, 2012 19:32:44 GMT 1
Love your story man, I didnt even mind it being written in script. But urhm...you could;ve put it in the main fanfiction topic.
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Post by Gabor Szollosy on Dec 2, 2012 19:46:40 GMT 1
Hey! I'm happy you liked it This is my first day on this forum, I'm sorry for not posting it to the right place. I hope it will still be found
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Post by jklinders on Dec 2, 2012 19:51:50 GMT 1
I'll pop a PM to Buch to get it moved
Welcome to the forum by the way gaborszollsy. I am the mostly non-writing nemesis to Buch and overall layabout around here.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Dec 2, 2012 20:21:55 GMT 1
He smells.
At any rate be sure to hop on over to the newcomers topic, I think you will like us.
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Post by Gabor Szollosy on Dec 2, 2012 20:22:34 GMT 1
I'll pop a PM to Buch to get it moved Welcome to the forum by the way gaborszollsy. I am the mostly non-writing nemesis to Buch and overall layabout around here. Thanks for the assistance, and the welcoming
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Post by Mister Buch on Dec 2, 2012 23:38:21 GMT 1
Is there anyone here who isn't my nemesis, now? Linders at least earned that title for the least serious (albeit most persistent) reasons.
Welcome and thanks for posting a fic, Gabor! I've separated the other comments from the story itself.
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Post by jklinders on Dec 3, 2012 0:24:27 GMT 1
Is there anyone here who isn't my nemesis, now? Linders at least earned that title for the least serious (albeit most persistent) reasons. Welcome and thanks for posting a fic, Gabor! I've separated the other comments from the story itself. Awwww, you do care. on topic, the fic is pretty good. Needs an editors touch here and there but nicely done.
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Post by Gabor Szollosy on Dec 3, 2012 10:02:04 GMT 1
On topic, the fic is pretty good. Needs an editors touch here and here but nicely done. Thanks I'm happy you've enjoyed it. I'm sorry if my grammar isn't flawless, but I'm not a native english speaker. I'll try my best every time I assure you Welcome and thanks for posting a fic, Gabor! I've separated the other comments from the story itself. Thanks Love the feedback!
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Post by jklinders on Dec 3, 2012 12:08:51 GMT 1
Given your location I was certain that English was not your first language. I assure you that you write in better grammar than most native English speakers that I have seen. Everyone needs an editor or at least a beta reader when they write. It's really hard to see your own mistakes.
I learned that when I tried my hand at writing a bit last year. Regrettably, though perhaps not for the folks here I stopped when the Arrival DLC made it clear I was completely AU with my ideas.
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Post by Mister Buch on Dec 3, 2012 12:10:33 GMT 1
I'd love to see some writing by you, Linders.
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Post by jklinders on Dec 3, 2012 12:13:32 GMT 1
Honestly, if I did it would have to be with original characters and maybe in an original work rather than playing in someone else's sandbox.
That's work and we all know how I feel about that...
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Post by Gabor Szollosy on Dec 3, 2012 12:19:42 GMT 1
Given your location I was certain that English was not your first language. I assure you that you write in better grammar than most native English speakers that I have seen. Everyone needs an editor or at least a beta reader when they write. It's really hard to see your own mistakes. That is kind of you to say. I try. To tell you the truth I'm fairly new to the funfic scene, where exactly would someone like me find beta readers and editors?
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Post by jklinders on Dec 3, 2012 12:24:27 GMT 1
You could start right here. Someone might take you on. Not me, I suck. I'm also unreliable. Lily is busy beta'ing another work but might be talked into it.
A couple of others here are pretty hard core on grammar.
A less friendly environment would be Fanfic.net. worth a try though.
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Post by Gabor Szollosy on Dec 3, 2012 15:40:39 GMT 1
You could start right here... I'll look into it. Thanks!
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Post by Lily Ariel Linders on Dec 4, 2012 0:21:14 GMT 1
You could start right here... I'll look into it. Thanks! I could offer my assistance with beta'ing, but I cannot guarantee how long it would take me to get it done... Normally when I'm not too busy with life business in the Offline World, I can get it done pretty quick but lately life has been throwing a lot at me, so I've been kind of slow these days... Let me know, though, if I can be of assistance; I would not mind...
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