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Post by Lily Ariel Linders on Mar 14, 2013 0:11:46 GMT 1
I think it's awesome - I just love the way your art looks and the way the colors flow - the rising sun in the last part there looks amazing!
Very very nice.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Mar 14, 2013 5:13:07 GMT 1
Thanks guys, I've fixed that last box. So thanks for the suggestion Cali, I was having trouble with it last night, until now.
Well I guess that's the end of it for now. I'm a little surprised how I managed to finish the prologue section just one month shy away from the comic's first anniversary. I was half expecting to be either close to it or a little late, since I was plagued by delays from Uni studies at the time and fighting off my depression.On the bright side, at least I felt I beat the ME trilogy on a much more positive note in my own terms.
As for Act 1, I'm not sure when the first few pages are going to be out since... I got a lot of work to do for the first act. You know, scripting, concept art, 3D model props for the background and more importantly; making a clear mapping of how the main arc is going to go and end. I want to keep the main plot as clean as possible.
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Post by Mister Buch on Mar 14, 2013 13:35:37 GMT 1
Well done, chief. And I thnk you're right to map out a fairly solid plot before you start. I think long stories get a lot of benefit from that.
About the prologue text box - I also think you should remove the word 'the'. Grammar reasons. 'The end of prologue' isn't 'correct'.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Mar 14, 2013 23:31:07 GMT 1
Loved the sun colours in that last page, was really well done. A long prologue, but thank goodness it was so good.
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Post by Mister Buch on May 1, 2013 14:38:05 GMT 1
Hey hey,
I like Joker's face. I remember years ago you saying you had trouble with drawing Joker - looks good here. And the style for those chapter title pages is really cool too.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on May 1, 2013 15:11:19 GMT 1
Agreed with Buch, i love how you did Joker. Beard worked out very well, As todler Turian....adorable.
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Post by jklinders on May 2, 2013 18:33:20 GMT 1
looking good Tillian, looking real good.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on May 4, 2013 15:57:25 GMT 1
Thanks! As for Joker, still have a bit of a spot of trouble with the face when trying to convery emotions, but then again, so does everyone else. Otherwise, I've been coping pretty well since then, as that old saying goes, "practice makes perfect".
Oh and the chapter artistic style is more or less inspired from Leonado's old sketches, with the old grainy backgrounds and sepia pencil, pigments or charcoal. Not sure which. Pity I'm working on an old and slightly dodgy computer at the moment, which does slow things down if I do more serious effects, otherwise I would push that look even harder.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on May 6, 2013 12:52:46 GMT 1
Space teddy bunnies! YES!
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Post by Mister Buch on May 6, 2013 13:03:38 GMT 1
I was waiting for that one.
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Post by lieden on May 9, 2013 12:26:12 GMT 1
That last page - just, LOL, Tillian. XD
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Post by Cali on May 9, 2013 22:14:33 GMT 1
That last segment was beyond glorious. If I were a ship captain in Mass Effect I'd pull stuff like that all the time against agitators/pirates/reapers etc.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on May 15, 2013 7:28:53 GMT 1
You think that's nuts? wait till you see the other two pages I've just posted up just then...
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Post by Cali on May 15, 2013 7:33:31 GMT 1
Ah ha ha!
Well, I'm a bit confused now. Was it reality? Or was it just fantasy on the turian child's part?
Either way, it was still glorious as all hell. Can't wait for the next episodes.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on May 16, 2013 0:20:51 GMT 1
That....was friggin' awesome and adorable!
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