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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Jan 23, 2013 7:49:19 GMT 1
Thanks, been using my comic as a art practice grounds, honestly.
As for Garrus, doing a rework on his features now. Probably after page 37, I'm going to take a small break, just to make a reference sheet for him, since I'm getting sick of waiting my computer to load up the in game screenshots folder, which takes a lot longer to load up than usual for some reason. plus it will help me nail down Garrus' appearance in my art style.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 9, 2013 21:01:59 GMT 1
Loving the facial expressions here Tillian. This has all the feels.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Feb 15, 2013 10:55:41 GMT 1
Thanks, been trying to improve the emotion facial features.
The next few pages will be the test of my skills in expressing stuff.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 22, 2013 18:07:02 GMT 1
LOVE THAT MOON!
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Post by lieden on Mar 5, 2013 8:04:39 GMT 1
Keep it going, Till! I like the chilly atmosphere in this last page.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Mar 5, 2013 10:00:50 GMT 1
The feels that were had in that last panel. THE FEELS TILLIAN!
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Mar 7, 2013 3:43:05 GMT 1
@ Lieden Thanks! Will do! Warhammer GorvarThat's the whole point of the comic, it supposed to have the FEELS.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Mar 7, 2013 11:11:51 GMT 1
THE FEELS! Yeah gonna stop that...for now. Last contribution is good as always, i actually did like the shot of the walking sticks so we see them instead of the characters talking. Kinda cool, love those shots sometimes.
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Post by Cali on Mar 9, 2013 20:13:25 GMT 1
Oh, boy. Garrus is gonna cause an avalanche!
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Mar 10, 2013 4:38:13 GMT 1
Not really to be honest, since there's only two pages left after this, before I'm calling off for a while.
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Post by Cali on Mar 10, 2013 4:55:54 GMT 1
Heh, I know. Still kinda funny to imply otherwise.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Mar 10, 2013 6:29:03 GMT 1
True enough.
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Mar 13, 2013 15:34:05 GMT 1
Well, it's a two page special release and that's the end of the prologue. I hope the last page looks optimistic with the colour scheme and the rising sun.
What do you guys think?
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Post by Mister Buch on Mar 13, 2013 17:47:14 GMT 1
The last page looks really good. I love that one. And it's nice to see this whole issue completed and together. That's a comic book right there. Awesome.
--I would say that I don't like the last line where you identify the prologue as such. It seems kind of fourth-wall breaking, the way it's worded.
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Post by Cali on Mar 13, 2013 20:45:16 GMT 1
Yeah, I would have suggested putting the prologue ending line in a different colored box or something, or perhaps lower.
Other than that, great work.
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