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Post by Cali on Feb 6, 2011 5:36:01 GMT 1
Whew, I think I can tell I'm going to like this story. I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. It's kind of odd, considering the fact that I'm currently writing a story that involves a human and his turian teammate. I thought a turian and human friendship would be a juicy backdrop to character development, but it seems you've beaten me to the punch. Props to you on that. And this happens to be the first fic I've read that includes a turian female as a character. I have to say, good job keeping their appearance as vague as possible, since I would wait until an actual Mass Effect title establishes them properly. Not sure what Vox's mindset was, but I thought it was sorta unnecessary that he was defensive toward Nick about Aula. I'll wait to see if there's a motive behind that, or if Vox is just a generally vindictive turian. Anyway, good so far. Anxious to see the rest.
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Post by docfronkensteen on Feb 6, 2011 14:19:09 GMT 1
Whew, I think I can tell I'm going to like this story. I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. It's kind of odd, considering the fact that I'm currently writing a story that involves a human and his turian teammate. I thought a turian and human friendship would be a juicy backdrop to character development, but it seems you've beaten me to the punch. Props to you on that. And this happens to be the first fic I've read that includes a turian female as a character. I have to say, good job keeping their appearance as vague as possible, since I would wait until an actual Mass Effect title establishes them properly. Not sure what Vox's mindset was, but I thought it was sorta unnecessary that he was defensive toward Nick about Aula. I'll wait to see if there's a motive behind that, or if Vox is just a generally vindictive turian. Anyway, good so far. Anxious to see the rest. Glad you like this one too! I planned for it to be much shorter, but it kind of took on a life of its own. Yeah, I knew I wanted to try something different with a female turian. Besides the looks, humans and turians have a lot in common; so I felt comfortable just adding feminine characteristics to the turian form. Vox is still distrusting of humans in general at this point, thats why he seemed kind of defensive about Aula. More to come soon!
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