jraym16
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Post by jraym16 on Jan 19, 2011 22:41:47 GMT 1
Hello again. It is I Jray(otherwise known as Raym for some reason) here with another installment of Mock Effect 2: The Other One. On a more serious note, I was conflicted about this chapter. On one hand, I'm not sure it was the best idea to spend an entire chapter on the Normandy, hut I also feel like some of my best stuff was in this chapter so far. Regardless, tell me what you think. Peace. Attachments:
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 20, 2011 7:30:42 GMT 1
I gotta say, this was pretty good. You thought of some things that never occurred to me, like the dossiers.
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jraym16
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Post by jraym16 on Jan 21, 2011 3:31:14 GMT 1
Thanks. But I gotta ask, I never got any feedback on Chapter 2. What'd you think of that?
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 21, 2011 3:49:33 GMT 1
S'ok. Sometimes this board can be slow about feedback.
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