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Post by Clint Johnston on Oct 13, 2010 20:58:40 GMT 1
Enjoy folks! Please let me know if I made any mistakes, and offer suggestions for improvement! Attachments:
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Post by Battlechantress on Oct 13, 2010 22:14:00 GMT 1
"Briefing room"... bahaha! Seriously, it's great.
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Post by Mister Buch on Oct 14, 2010 16:31:27 GMT 1
SYMPATHETIC VOICE: It’s all right, Commander. He’s just grumpy because he’s a poorly explained caricature of Scotty from Star Trek. I’m Lt. Gabriella Daniels, and this is … well you’re just going to call him Scotty anyway.
JANE: Well hello to both of you. Aside from the clamps what are you two up to?
SCOTTY: We
Awesome. Well done.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Oct 14, 2010 20:18:15 GMT 1
That one was just obvious. Had to be written.
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Post by jklinders on Oct 15, 2010 2:48:17 GMT 1
I absolutely loved the line where where Grunt started in on the writers all posh and intellectually and then switched to "Oh right Me Krogan RAWR"
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Post by Mister Buch on Oct 15, 2010 2:53:28 GMT 1
Yeah but Clint it's the way you did it! Just having the narrative start referring to him as Scotty was a very funny touch.
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Post by Knightfall on Oct 15, 2010 3:25:48 GMT 1
WELSHY!
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