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Post by Battlechantress on Sept 9, 2010 22:30:27 GMT 1
For the most part, I caught who was who easily enough, but I could not figure out who the heck was supposed to be #5 (not enough info). I understand what you were trying to do, but maybe the piece needs to be fleshed out more? I think it could still work, but I can see why you had difficulty writing it as well.
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Post by Nemonus on Sept 10, 2010 18:23:08 GMT 1
Five? That's Thane. I thought the wife's name would give it away enough.
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Post by Battlechantress on Sept 10, 2010 22:16:52 GMT 1
Crap, I forgot her name. I knew it sounded familiar but I couldn't place it. Sorry about that.
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Post by Nemonus on Sept 12, 2010 21:52:25 GMT 1
Tis okay.
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