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Post by jklinders on Jun 23, 2010 20:57:16 GMT 1
This was the first fan fic I read in a bit. I love the concept of the "damaged" backgrounds discussing Shepard. Narrative was nice and clean, set the scene without being to wordy. Am hungry for the next installment.
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Post by ommadawn on Jun 25, 2010 0:08:58 GMT 1
Hmm, makes me want to read this now. *toddles off*
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Post by ommadawn on Jun 25, 2010 0:14:52 GMT 1
*toddles back*
Nice! Good characterisation and an interesting, refreshingly different start. I want to read more as well.
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Post by jklinders on Jun 25, 2010 4:26:00 GMT 1
*toddles back* Nice! Good characterisation and an interesting, refreshingly different start. I want to read more as well. Yayyyy!!1 I influenced someone! ;D
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Jun 26, 2010 10:09:20 GMT 1
Interesting story. Good too see stories that were based on a different perspectives, not naming names here, but it's refreshing to look through the eyes of professional harden marines, instead of star-struck C-Sec officers. Also with the characters, they are likable and well rounded.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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