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Post by Cali on Mar 12, 2010 19:30:40 GMT 1
Nice going me! You're terrific! (Smooching noises)
Kidding. The reason I created this thread is to make sure everyone who already read it knows that I'll be making some changes to it regarding canon. Let's just say Zaeed's backstory is difficult to nail down, since Bioware is not very straightforward in giving that guys info out.
Feel free to post your reviews here as well. Next chapter should be up this week.
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Post by Mr. Glow on Mar 12, 2010 20:39:48 GMT 1
I know what you mean, the official site says he's forty, when he's clearly not, meaning he started the Blue Suns aged 20, after his career in the Alliance Navy, presumably serving after school and at weekends. Anyway, I liked this and I'm looking forward to seeing where the story'll go. Great opening theme music, by the way.
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Post by Cali on Mar 12, 2010 21:19:52 GMT 1
The Blue Suns at age 15, actually. I'm going to assume he was born 2135 instead, making him 50. That should be good enough.
Also, expect a soundtrack to this, since I'll be uploading a lot of recommended music to listen to while reading certain parts of the story.
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Post by Mister Buch on Mar 16, 2010 21:38:48 GMT 1
The writing is very professional. And it's a nice idea for a story. I'm rather fond of Zaeed!
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Post by Cali on Mar 16, 2010 21:58:24 GMT 1
Preserving modesty in 3... 2... 1...
I actually consider myself an average writer. I feel that I rush into events and only spend a few moments going into appropriate detail. Just my opinion of myself of course.
Still, writing this story has been pretty fun, and I hope to continue it as long as possible.
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Post by buggirl on Aug 19, 2010 15:56:49 GMT 1
Nice little story Cali, well written, and yes he does come across as a dangerous bastard. I have recently become a bit of a Zaeed fan and have been toying with an idea for a Zaeed fic for a while, it even has a similar title to yours (I was going to call it 'the magnificent bastard') But I don't think I can now after your excellent bit of fic!
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