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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 9, 2010 2:50:35 GMT 1
Very nice idea to show this from Tali's POV. I think you got her personality nicely. I also loved the moment with them all chiming in on the comm at once.
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Post by Raidos on Feb 9, 2010 4:13:45 GMT 1
Interesting. Are you planning on continuing this as a multi-chapter fic? If so, are you going to tell the story of ME2 through Tali's eyes or tell the story of the 2 years after SHepard's death?
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Post by yargling on Feb 9, 2010 10:45:22 GMT 1
Thanks for the feedback. As for future chapters, I haven't planned that far ahead yet - what I'm thinking now is to do another section from tali's PoV, and then others from various members of the crew; and I was thinking of setting them in the time between Shepards death and his return Come to think of it, should this have a spoiler alert on it heh - I mean, its not like the Shepard death is too far into the game, but still.
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Post by Cali on Feb 20, 2010 4:35:26 GMT 1
I'm really liking the story. I don't really care for the thought of what Shepard's squad did when he was in death-coma, but reading this makes me think I should add this in my mental canon for Paul Shepard.
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Post by yargling on Feb 20, 2010 11:27:07 GMT 1
I'm really liking the story. I don't really care for the thought of what Shepard's squad did when he was in death-coma, but reading this makes me think I should add this in my mental canon for Paul Shepard. LOL, well, thanks. ;D I'm thinking of covering some of Garrus' time next, although that one will be somewhat harder to do well given we have a fair idea of what he did anyway (assuming you played ME2).
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Post by jklinders on Mar 1, 2010 17:56:15 GMT 1
Good work here, looking forward to the next chapter.
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