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Post by Zarsthor on Feb 1, 2010 4:53:01 GMT 1
Ha ha ha ha ha.
Wasn't expecting that. Thought it was going to be a serious thing. Worked really well though. Some fo the Dialog felt a little forced though. All the ............... from the cameraman at the end didn't work for me either. Otherwise very amusing little documenatry drama. Hopefully you'll do another.
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Post by Cali on Feb 1, 2010 16:48:32 GMT 1
It was unpolished, and I still haven't nailed down the script format in an organized manner.
Thanks anyway, I already have the second chapter written, but I won't post it until tonight.
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