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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 18, 2009 21:24:14 GMT 1
This really is one of the best ME fanfics I've read. You absolutely NAILED Kaiden's character, and Shepard's too. The way you kept everything professional in their tone and behaviour except for hints at Kaiden's feelings of inadequacy and nerves about Shepard - your analysis of the source of Shepard's strength and ability to deal with loss.
Really, really good. I wish the game had included a bit of dialogue like that after the Virmire mission. You're right - something is needed between Ash/Kaiden's death and the return to status quo. This would have been more than sufficient.
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Post by Hodster on Mar 10, 2009 3:09:18 GMT 1
This is WAY better then what happens in the game. I think you did this conversation between Kaidan and Shepard perfectly. Very well done.
I think this would be go great with Rascarin's Staying Behind story.
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