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Post by Rascarin on Oct 6, 2009 20:10:01 GMT 1
Wow, this was really chilling and a little bit horrible, too. You certainly got the horror right, well done!
Poor her, though.
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Post by Zarsthor on Oct 6, 2009 20:17:49 GMT 1
I was reading this duri9ng the morning and found my eyebrow permantly risen. The god of Grammar has fallen. Buchy, baby, what was all that gramatical, spell check horrors for? Scare me with atmosphere not bad spelling! It was too scary! To devilish! It makes me want to weep and raise my eyes to the ehavens and beg the question "Why Giod? Whjy are you so cruel?" And his reply will no doubt be
"It was late, I was tired. I skipped on the grammar. Sorry. Have this signed copy of twilight instead."
*Shudders* I'm definitly feeling the halloween mood. lol
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Post by Mister Buch on Oct 6, 2009 20:20:22 GMT 1
Oh God - really? Spelling and grammar errors? Now I'm the only one truly horrified.
Consider them corrected within the hour.
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Thanks for reviewing.
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Post by Zarsthor on Oct 6, 2009 20:25:20 GMT 1
You have an eye then I will release the hounds of the dictionary.
I may be drunk right now. lol
edit:
I emant to say
You have an hour then I will release the dictionary hounds or something.
I am definitly drunk.
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Post by Mister Buch on Oct 6, 2009 20:46:12 GMT 1
The dictionary has already caught up with me Cap'n! Got dictionary dot com open here. --
Okay, I fixed it up. There were indeed a lot of mistakes. And it was pretty rushed in places. I've fixed some of that too. I'll be more careful with chapters two and three.
Again, thanks for reading it.
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Post by Rascarin on Oct 6, 2009 23:53:34 GMT 1
More chapters? Hooray! I thought that it was a oneshot!
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Post by Mister Buch on Oct 7, 2009 16:18:26 GMT 1
It's not over yet, Scary Scarin - we don't know if she lives......... or DIES!
Btw, I just went through it AGAIN and changed it to the first person perspective. Just so you know.
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