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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 21, 2013 14:11:03 GMT 1
I'm just kidding, it's a good choice!
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 21, 2013 14:13:26 GMT 1
Sod it, im making you the Master and you will like it Mister! We all know all of you English are evil.
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 21, 2013 14:14:27 GMT 1
We're so evil that the entire Imperial Admiralty is staffed by us.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 21, 2013 14:20:20 GMT 1
God, i love the Empire so hard....
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 23, 2013 21:56:08 GMT 1
New chapter is up!
Also I find this soundtrack fitting this story for some reason.
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 24, 2013 1:00:22 GMT 1
Good stuff, Gorvonilus. The romance stuff was very sweet, again. The awkward tension and all that - you have a knack for that kind of scene I think.
I really liked the line about the seatbelts. And "Aye aye, partner!" was very cute. xD
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 24, 2013 11:10:00 GMT 1
Gotta admit, i enjoyed writing that part. Sometimes it just flows, you know. Also Starfleet must have one serious lack of unionship in the future. No seatbelts, computers exploding in your face for no reason...jesus, must be a nightmare to work on those ships!
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 29, 2013 16:30:55 GMT 1
HOW DARE YOU Jonathan - you changed it from Tilia to Talia in this one.
I like the dialogue between Buch and Till - like the way they react to each other and the Sudoku joke was great. Also I like Buch's dilemma with these Vakarians. I like a difficult decision like that and Star Trek is alays great with them. And hey, Glow!
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 29, 2013 20:12:21 GMT 1
Oh gosh darn, i'll edit it. Nobody will ever know.... As for the dialogue...well I took the idea from an Enterprise episode I loathed, Dear Doctor it was called.However at the end of the episode when the Doctor did commit Mass Genocide, he felt pretty okay with it...hence I hated Enterprise. So for Buch I wanted to do the most sensible thing and see how his past haunts him. It adds angst AND a cool character arc
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 29, 2013 23:10:50 GMT 1
What is it with my namesakes and murdering people for the greater good?? The real me would only ever murder people out of spite.
I really like that the scenes are based around actual Star Trek storylines like that - it makes the whole thing seem more authentic and loving as a tribute.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Apr 29, 2013 23:46:13 GMT 1
Well buch, if there is one man on this forum I know who would do anything for the greater good...It's Iron, but you are a close second!
Also I wanna show the assholes who made Enterprise and Star Trek: Nemeses how this shit is done...kinda.
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