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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Aug 16, 2012 9:44:52 GMT 1
Personal experience there Rascarin? -wink, wink, nudge nudge, run away-
In all seriousness, i liked this one. Very personal, extremely personal. But intriguing.
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Post by Lily Ariel Linders on Aug 16, 2012 10:15:51 GMT 1
Thanks for the feedback, guys. I like hearing your interpretations, makes it interesting re-reading it with another persons viewpoint. If I may ask for specific opinions - I was trying to use the structure of the poem to build a pace that matched what was going on - do you think it worked? I mean, I know how it sounds in my head, but I don't know if I got it across... That's actually what I was trying to say when I first posted; but I was too tired to actually think of the right words to say... ;D I felt like reading the poem I was actually experiencing the event, and the pacing worked very well... it matched the emotions someone would be feeling in that situation...
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Post by Mister Buch on Aug 16, 2012 12:33:23 GMT 1
Thanks for the feedback, guys. I like hearing your interpretations, makes it interesting re-reading it with another persons viewpoint. If I may ask for specific opinions - I was trying to use the structure of the poem to build a pace that matched what was going on - do you think it worked? I mean, I know how it sounds in my head, but I don't know if I got it across... That's actually what I was trying to say when I first posted; but I was too tired to actually think of the right words to say... ;D I felt like reading the poem I was actually experiencing the event, and the pacing worked very well... it matched the emotions someone would be feeling in that situation... Yes it definitely matched the pace. It kind of felt like a heartbeat, too.
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