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Post by Knightfall on Apr 23, 2012 23:13:12 GMT 1
Fantastic story, and a great play on the "dropping of eaves" bits throughout the game. Again, and I think I mention this every time, you have some crazy methods for putting us in the scene with Shepard or whichever character we're following at a subconscious level. The little ticks she has, the (seemingly) random things that distract her, what her thoughts are centered on at that time. Just great stuff. I started to feel on edge with her, and that's an element to your stories you've really refined. Well done!
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Post by jklinders on Apr 23, 2012 23:28:29 GMT 1
This was really good Buch.
I agree with Knight about how well you put us in Shep's head. I got me a couple of chills I did. Good job.
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 24, 2012 11:24:01 GMT 1
Thanks very much!
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