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Post by GarrusVakarian on Mar 21, 2012 12:46:32 GMT 1
This is will be the thread reserved for comments and reviews about Mass Effect: Irregular Hunters at Space. Make sure to read it if you have free time!
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Post by Clint Johnston on Mar 21, 2012 17:31:59 GMT 1
I scanned it. Your phrasing is not quite right. You don't have to say "The three replied' or provide so much background. You already know your audience is familiar with the concept. You seem happy with it and are up to chapter 6, so I'm sure it's not ruffled too many feathers.
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Post by GarrusVakarian on Mar 21, 2012 20:44:13 GMT 1
Hmm... yeah, you are right. I find it annoying to write those type of phrases all the time, but what keeps me writing them is this question that might come from the readers: "Who is saying that sentence?"
Sorry if I troubled you Clint.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Mar 21, 2012 21:57:52 GMT 1
No trouble. I'm a rather harsh reviewer. That's why I don't do it very often
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Post by GarrusVakarian on Mar 22, 2012 2:39:00 GMT 1
Ah, don't feel that way. You may be harsh yes, but you are speaking the truth from what you learned as experience. So, I accept any kind of criticism since they help me to learn and fix English spelling (Yeah, I'm not native English Speaker).
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