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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jun 4, 2011 23:48:50 GMT 1
An very interesting story here. I do like the scenes changing and jumping aroun, it feels like 'Lost'. I think you have the mood down right for Omega, and i cant wait to read more.
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Post by MassEffectWikia on Jun 5, 2011 2:13:53 GMT 1
Thanks, man! I tried to make the story kind of a: "Oh Yeah!" sort of thing like Lost. Lots of things happening, but in the end it makes sence. I'm not entirely sure if I can keep that format of storytelling up, however. In order for that to happen, there needs to be major plot points in each chapter (something Lost had down pat.) But, I'll try my best.
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