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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 10, 2012 15:05:55 GMT 1
*Facepalm*
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 10, 2012 15:33:23 GMT 1
BOOYAH! How’s that for calibration, Bee-yotches!
Best. Line. EVER.
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Post by jklinders on Feb 11, 2012 12:53:33 GMT 1
Good wrap up. I enjoyed how you worked in Tali's plot armour. I really enjoyed drunk Jacob. He actually kinda seemed that way to me in the final mission.
Looking forward to the epilogue.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 11, 2012 14:18:42 GMT 1
Makes me feel bad i never got round to download Zaeed.
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 14, 2012 20:50:53 GMT 1
"JOHN: Dumbass said it backwards." That's maybe my favourite line so far. ;D
The desklamp thing is actually better. The Legion chapter is excellent, Clint!
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 14, 2012 21:31:59 GMT 1
Oh wow, I didn't realise you'd already put up the final chapter. I just read the last few back to back, but I thought you had one more to go. It's a shame you didn't have room for Tali's loyalty mission. When I was planning this fic, I had a lot of stuff lined up for that mission (that one Admiral was going to be called 'Admiral Teyrn Loghain vas Dragon Age', and there was also going to be, 'Admiral British Vas Cambridge Rowing Team'), so I was looking forward to your take on that one especially. But - using her in the ending the way you did was good - and very much in keeping with Mock Effect 1, so once again I'm flattered. About the final chapter: Well I love the 'Prize' bit, and the very clever business of having Jane reject a ton of potential romances. This is very similar to what I would have done, but much smarter. 'Seeha later' - yes. Very well done. And I like the bit where John and Jane pick team-members as if it were a gym class - VERY good point, and joke. Also 'hiding behind the amazingly tough barriers' - I lol'd. This is actually one of the funniest chapters. I like it a lot. There's a great sense of 'fun' to it, which I know from experience is hard to meintain after so many chapters. So there is an epilogue to come, right?
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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 14, 2012 21:34:06 GMT 1
Chapter 22 will serve as a DLC coverage and an epilogue.
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 14, 2012 21:35:17 GMT 1
All right, well you have one month!
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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 14, 2012 21:38:08 GMT 1
Where did you learn to count? I have 3 weeks!
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 14, 2012 21:42:31 GMT 1
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 14, 2012 23:08:15 GMT 1
God im so happy i got raised during the SNES era with no Jaguar....
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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 20, 2012 19:50:56 GMT 1
This is it! The last Chapter! W00t! End of a journey blah blah blah! Attachments:
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Feb 20, 2012 20:50:08 GMT 1
Read it, loved it....and you get a virtual hug for mentioning Dr Who.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Feb 20, 2012 21:10:27 GMT 1
Here's the Epilogue, if anybody is downloading. Attachments:
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Post by Mister Buch on Feb 20, 2012 21:20:57 GMT 1
This is it! The last Chapter! W00t! End of a journey blah blah blah! For some reason I feel like this is the best chapter. Something a little different - a touch of class, maybe. Something distinctly European and bearded about it, which really elevates the whole thing. But regardless, you 'did it' - after a real effort. I remember you emailing me about the idea in 2010. Just like then I'm impressed, flaterred and it makes me laugh. This is a good day. Mock Effect 2.
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