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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 14, 2013 0:02:53 GMT 1
He reminds ME of you.
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Post by CAPT Issac R. Madden on Jan 14, 2013 0:19:17 GMT 1
He reminds ME of you. Snark attempt failed. You're losing your touch, Buch.
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 14, 2013 0:27:11 GMT 1
No I meant that literally. I think he's a lot like the real thing. In good ways!
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Post by CAPT Issac R. Madden on Jan 14, 2013 0:36:37 GMT 1
Aside from not being able to swim, I agree.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jan 14, 2013 16:50:06 GMT 1
A) Nice "I liked him better when he was depressed" line. B) no mention of missing fingers? C) 15 seconds? I'm speaking merely my hypothesis here, but i'm told if it takes only 15 seconds, you're doing it wrong.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 14, 2013 17:03:43 GMT 1
A; Your welcome B:He is laughing the pain away, dont worry yuo get sad faced Gorvar next chapter! C: The 15 second thing is a call back to chapter 2 where Lillian was able to slow down time so 15 seconds can last for a long, long time. in fact there are several references to chapter 2. Cookie for the one who gets them.
And on that note, next chapter......Clint's origin.
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Post by jklinders on Jan 14, 2013 19:54:31 GMT 1
Was it just me that noticed that the doomed kingdom was attacked by Bowser? The description either made me think of Bowser or Godzilla. Bowser was funnier so I went with that.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 14, 2013 21:45:26 GMT 1
And the ant things were Goomba's. Drama ruined....but so worth it. XD Your character man, you pick whatever destroys your future kingdom.
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Post by herrwozzeck on Jan 14, 2013 22:22:46 GMT 1
And the ant things were Goomba's. Drama ruined....but so worth it. XD Personally, I think some of the drama had already escaped after I found out the king's name was Link. Now I get to imagine that Lind is the son of Link and Zelda and the dragon was sent there by Ganondorf. Ganondorf probably made things worse for himself, but that's just me.
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 14, 2013 22:38:43 GMT 1
I thought it was Godzilla too!
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 14, 2013 22:43:09 GMT 1
You still bitter I blew you in that kraken fight, Herro? And I would like to thank Buch for pointing out the inside joke. which doesnt make it funny anymore....you lame ass Larry.
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 14, 2013 22:48:31 GMT 1
Fuckin' LARRY
Okay I fixed it to be slightly more misleading.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 14, 2013 22:51:38 GMT 1
I love this guy!
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Post by Mister Buch on Jan 15, 2013 1:59:47 GMT 1
The upcoming chapter -
Seriously, this story is getting REALLY good now. You're putting tons of clever little ideas and objects into this fantasy world, you're making all of these unique characters interact with each other in clever ways, (you're somehow managing to include everybody active on the forum) and you have that 'page-turner' what-happens-next kind of quality that an adventure story thrives on and people like me can never capture. I really want to know what the deal is with Gorvar and his nonexistant magic body, and there was so much build up to the romantic moment that it came across as really, really romantic and lovely. This is good, you are good. Great.
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Post by Warhammer Gorvar on Jan 15, 2013 10:55:03 GMT 1
I'm glad you think of it like that Buch! Funny thing is it all just flows so well and i;m glad I got you for a editor. My only gripes I really got with myself is that Clint and Iron;s origin are somewhat similar and I feel like Gorvar is stealing the spotlight a little...which I really dont want to do because he is my character and my story. I dont wanna be like William Shatner in Star Trek V.
So I promise in the next chapters, now the Origins are all sorta done, we will focus on the antagonists and Lind's storyline. Plus....well I dont wanna spoil to much but nothing is at it seems with Buch. Nobody thinks it;s a little bit to much of a coincidence here that Buch popped up all over the palce EXCEPT for Clint? Food for thought.
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