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Post by Cali on Apr 4, 2012 0:41:04 GMT 1
Heh. Yeah I did notice that you were a bit more lenient than in other reviews.
Nobody makes me feel quite like a champ like you do, Buch.
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 4, 2012 1:08:40 GMT 1
I can't tell if you're being sarcastic or not!
I like your writing a lot. But I wanted to go into detail about this. In my arrogant way I think you could improve a lot by looking at it. (And yeah I have only read the year-old stuff so far).
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Post by Cali on Apr 4, 2012 1:12:38 GMT 1
No! No! I wasn't being sarcastic. Wait... it's the avatar that made you think that, wasn't it?
And yes, Cyan Steel is certainly far from perfect, no doubt about that. I'd go as far to say it's my least perfect fanfiction. And yeah, I should definitely look into it, but considering that I'm so awful at proofreading, I don't think I could do it without any help.
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Post by Mister Buch on Apr 4, 2012 1:13:14 GMT 1
Aw man. I like it!
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Post by Cali on Aug 29, 2014 3:16:34 GMT 1
Wakey, wakey, fools! Been a long time! I'm coming back to write more of this fic! And when I do, ya'll better run!
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Post by Tillian Panthesis on Sept 25, 2015 17:51:02 GMT 1
I haven't finished reading all of it, but I'm up to the part where the protagonists were interrogating a turian convict that survived that one particular assault.
So far it's intriguing and I do like mystery genre feel to it. It's kind of refreshing, especially after seeing all that non-subtle bombastic action cramp into the ME games. Plus a story that involves adding more details of the ME setting in a HBO kind of a way is really nice. Especially these days.
I'll add more substantial criticisms once I gone deep into the story and let the story sink in.
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Post by Cali on Oct 1, 2017 20:43:39 GMT 1
So I'm going to be recycling the plot of Cyan Steel for another (original) setting. This isn't dead, it's just uh... mutating?
Yeah it's a mutant! That's what it is! Somebody blast the 1990's X-Men cartoon theme!
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Post by pastoraloyster on Jan 3, 2018 12:04:55 GMT 1
Now this is one of the most impressive stories of this game, given my love for reading books of various fanfics. This is my favorite pastime together with casinoonlineca.ca. I like 2 more fanfics for Mass Effect, for example there a short description - The protagonist wakes up in the body of a simple microorganism. He does not remember anything about himself. He has only a strange ability and nothing more. Pretty original work with a part of the world taken from Mass Effect, maybe even the canon will be but is not exactly clear yet. The approximate time of events is the end of the Protean empire, when they were already being killed.
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