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Post by Clint Johnston on Mar 2, 2011 6:25:28 GMT 1
Because of the new rule, I'm starting a new thread, which will be the home of all Mock Effect 2 reviews for this and upcoming chapters. Attached presently is Chapter 11: Going Up? Attachments:
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Post by jklinders on Mar 4, 2011 16:27:58 GMT 1
I'm still loving how Grunt comes out with intelligent ideas. I also love how the others are starting to react to it.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Apr 8, 2011 20:33:26 GMT 1
Here's Chapter 12! Let me know what you think! Attachments:
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Post by Clint Johnston on Apr 10, 2011 2:46:37 GMT 1
Wow... *crickets*
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Post by Cali on Apr 10, 2011 3:15:42 GMT 1
Boo! You suck!
Haha, but seriously. Haven't read it yet. Gimme a minute.
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Post by Clint Johnston on May 7, 2011 17:05:11 GMT 1
If you're still reading the series, please post a "I Read It" reply to this post. If not, post one anyway. My poor ego needs the help. Anyhow, here's Chapter 13. Let me know what you think of how I handled Jacob's father. Attachments:
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Post by jklinders on May 8, 2011 11:57:47 GMT 1
Still reading and enjoying it Clint. Sorry I have not had much to say lately
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Post by Clint Johnston on Jul 1, 2011 19:55:02 GMT 1
Check it out! A new chapter. No fourth of July jokes though. Probably because this has been siting waiting completion for the past few weeks. Let me know if you're still enjoying (And if I'm screwing it up) Attachments:
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Post by jklinders on Jul 2, 2011 5:35:26 GMT 1
That's pretty much how people in Illium SHOULD have been acting around Samara. I'm still enjoying it but the loyalty missions don't seem to have the same snazz as the main story. granted Miranda's wasn't too easy to make fun of.
Looking forward to how you handle Kolyat's excessive wangst.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Aug 17, 2011 16:15:51 GMT 1
Heeere's chapter 15. What do you guy's think of the line "Revenge is a Hell of a Laxative" Attachments:
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Post by jklinders on Aug 17, 2011 20:18:12 GMT 1
I don't think that line was in the version you put up[ Clint. Otherwise it's still good. Keep it up.
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Post by Mister Buch on Aug 17, 2011 21:49:33 GMT 1
That's one of the best chapters. My favourite is the opening scene: MIRANDA: And she said she loves Nielsen’s Fifth, just like I do... JOHN: I would love a fifth… JANE: Hush, we’ll visit Dr. Bastillasmother next, she always has drinks laying about. MIRANDA: And she even tells jokes. She has such a sense of humor. I’m not funny at all. JOHN: If only you knew. Because that was my exact reaction. xD Also loved the tattoos joke and the Revan memory - but John is no way smart enough to build a nuke.
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Post by jklinders on Aug 17, 2011 22:00:34 GMT 1
By the way Clint. You made John a closet Vanguard? o.O Oh dear God... The things you can do with that. I see bad caffeine jokes in our future but in a really really good way.
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Post by Mister Buch on Aug 17, 2011 22:58:22 GMT 1
Reading this always makes me want to play Mass Effect 2, which is the mark of a good parody I think. My ME parody was based on 'Yet Another Kotor Parody' which made me re-play the game every time I read it.
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Post by Clint Johnston on Aug 18, 2011 6:12:55 GMT 1
Nope, that line is for later on (not sure if it's better as an Ending for Garrus' mission or a line somewhere in Zaeeds
As for the John building a Nuke, he kind of walked backward into it. Hell if Kirrahe could do it with the colored lights...
Seemed like the time to bring it out. Who knows what Cerberus did to him...
Buch - Think that's what makes me keep coming back to write more. Because I get to play a chunk again, then go through the text, and wisecrack all the way home...
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